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Thursday, July 9, 2009

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the young and fertile mind
pushes out poems
as easy as ejaculation
still crammed with excess
energy and words
I remember but cannot
call up

within my aging neurons
there is no stroke of genuis
urging the spew

14 comments:

  1. good one barbara... a change of surroundings for a while should help... got vacation time coming?

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  2. No change of surroundings coming up any time soon for me, laughingwolf. :(

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  3. oooh, i like erotic sensual poems, barbara, and in your own way this is one!!! age be damned!

    xo
    kj

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  4. dang!

    a staycation should help, though

    perhaps a fancy bubblebath, with candles, incense, wine... and piped-in, gentle music?

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  5. ha ha ha ha...There may be great poetic fertility in the ejaculate of the young mind but most of it is lost to masturbation. It is with age we learn to make love to our words.

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  6. Must be the celibacy that's screwing me up, walking man.

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  7. jinnereyeJuly 10, 2009

    hope you don't mind dear old friend...you have thusly inspired my jinnereye

    ==========

    the containered we
    depressions walking
    the inspirational sea
    heavings talking
    the observing me
    heavens mocking
    the brewing tea
    two hands cupping
    the sharing tree
    sunlights unblocking

    join me in song
    dear myth maker
    as we travel along
    dear running wolf
    our beaten
    and remembered
    path

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  8. Great poem barbara.
    I wish you always feeling young as always!

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  9. "a faith in life a faith in death
    tho'both bare witness in youthful quest
    for time will tell and time will fell
    and damn success to failure's tale
    twas' once a view and twice its tool
    but all mere struggle eternal pool
    for old is young and young is old
    except when labelled be either fold
    the rise of stem but turns the page
    to loft its bloom in fool or sage"

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  10. Very creative! Love when people express themselves through poetry!

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  11. Ejaculating words isn't that easy, Barbara.
    Grossly funny, even though it's missing
    the vital K Y Jelly that expells the truth.

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  12. That would've made it smoother, for sure, Uncle Tree. Hahahahah.

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