ha ha ha ha...There may be great poetic fertility in the ejaculate of the young mind but most of it is lost to masturbation. It is with age we learn to make love to our words.
hope you don't mind dear old friend...you have thusly inspired my jinnereye
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the containered we depressions walking the inspirational sea heavings talking the observing me heavens mocking the brewing tea two hands cupping the sharing tree sunlights unblocking
join me in song dear myth maker as we travel along dear running wolf our beaten and remembered path
"a faith in life a faith in death tho'both bare witness in youthful quest for time will tell and time will fell and damn success to failure's tale twas' once a view and twice its tool but all mere struggle eternal pool for old is young and young is old except when labelled be either fold the rise of stem but turns the page to loft its bloom in fool or sage"
good one barbara... a change of surroundings for a while should help... got vacation time coming?
ReplyDeleteNo change of surroundings coming up any time soon for me, laughingwolf. :(
ReplyDeleteoooh, i like erotic sensual poems, barbara, and in your own way this is one!!! age be damned!
ReplyDeletexo
kj
dang!
ReplyDeletea staycation should help, though
perhaps a fancy bubblebath, with candles, incense, wine... and piped-in, gentle music?
ha ha ha ha...There may be great poetic fertility in the ejaculate of the young mind but most of it is lost to masturbation. It is with age we learn to make love to our words.
ReplyDeleteMust be the celibacy that's screwing me up, walking man.
ReplyDeletehope you don't mind dear old friend...you have thusly inspired my jinnereye
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the containered we
depressions walking
the inspirational sea
heavings talking
the observing me
heavens mocking
the brewing tea
two hands cupping
the sharing tree
sunlights unblocking
join me in song
dear myth maker
as we travel along
dear running wolf
our beaten
and remembered
path
Thank you, Jin!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem barbara.
ReplyDeleteI wish you always feeling young as always!
"a faith in life a faith in death
ReplyDeletetho'both bare witness in youthful quest
for time will tell and time will fell
and damn success to failure's tale
twas' once a view and twice its tool
but all mere struggle eternal pool
for old is young and young is old
except when labelled be either fold
the rise of stem but turns the page
to loft its bloom in fool or sage"
Thank you, spottedwolf!
ReplyDeleteVery creative! Love when people express themselves through poetry!
ReplyDeleteEjaculating words isn't that easy, Barbara.
ReplyDeleteGrossly funny, even though it's missing
the vital K Y Jelly that expells the truth.
That would've made it smoother, for sure, Uncle Tree. Hahahahah.
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